Thursday 14 June 2007

A breather!!

Hidden fears,
A storm rises;
then calms...
Rests it doesn't!
Restricted and refrained, screams
Quite surrenders,
Stillness haunting
Qualms undeciphered, unpredictable,
they rise and I fall...tumble uncontrollably...
under my fears, a hope squished,
breathing heavy and faith taking its last breath...
Puff!!! light,

4 comments:

Sh'shank said...

Some very powerful words and going together
a pretty stark picture...
but...

~P~ said...
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~P~ said...

But, what?? It's just a breather,not a poem...does that answer your doubts??

Pavitra said...

hmmmm....squish it as abnormal and push it aside...understanding these fears is necessary...its easier said than done but it saves u a lot of prolonged agony later on