Two solitary birds that flew in the distance;
I saw it in their flight,
So real, so sure of themselves.
The Ocean that spread its wings to eternity;
I saw it in the vigour,
that lay deep within.
The overhead sky that cast shadows of the setting sun;
I saw it in the clouds,
so full of confidence.
The plant from the kitchen garden that faught to its roots;
I saw it in its sway,
so swift.
The shriek of the neighbour's daughter who wanted to be let out;
I saw it in her trials,
so wanting to be free.
The trees atop the hill that stood as landmarks;
I saw it in their huddle,
so knit together like family.
The wind that caressed your locks like its darling;
I saw it in its efforts,
to express its heart's desires.
The rain that dreanched you in its hope;
I saw it in the little droplets,
so tiny but so warm!!
It is love that keeps them all at their best.
With love
For the change in weather,
From my much loved home's balcony....
3 comments:
oh good gosh! beautiful poem... I loved the build up and the subtle feelings of warmth it gives the reader... I can see how pretty Vizag can be from this poem!
Cheers!!
(wan more wan more :))
truly amazing....keep it up
i wished i was there close 2 ...experiencing every moment ....but why m i complaining ..is it because i missed tht moment or is it i missed the poet enjoying the moment ..difficult to say.
but ... i think i didnt miss tht moment as i can always relive tht moment by going down the dreamy eyes of the poet
lucky meeeee
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